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A review of Ron Silliman's ๐‘‡โ„Ž๐‘’ ๐‘๐‘’๐‘ค ๐‘†๐‘’๐‘›๐‘ก๐‘’๐‘›๐‘๐‘’

Updated: Aug 1, 2019


Ron Silliman

Ron Silliman

The New Sentence

Roof Books, 1987 209pp., $22.84 pb.

ISBN 0937804207


The subject is poetic innovation; the title by which it's become known is L-A-N-G-U-A-G-E. One chapter from Ron Silliman's ๐‘‡โ„Ž๐‘’ ๐‘๐‘’๐‘ค ๐‘†๐‘’๐‘›๐‘ก๐‘’๐‘›๐‘๐‘’, entitled "The New Sentence", ought to be enough for our appreciation of poetic innovation and, more specifically, the sentence-LANGUAGE nexus which his celebrated treatise describes. But it isn't.ย He said inย a previous chapterย entitled "Of Theory, To Practice" that "The goal of poetry can never be the proof of theory, although it is inevitably a test of the poet's beliefs." (59) Really? Isn't it just the purpose ofย  theory to justify a poetics? A "poet's prose", as he says in "Towards Prose"? So which is it: "goal of poetry" or "the poet's beliefs"? It's in those murky waters of poetry per se and how it works that Silliman's dropped his own 'new sentence'.


Between whatย poetry isย and the howย of its meaning & beliefs,ย is justย where that intermediaryย 'sentence' solution ofย Silliman's lies, the kernel of a more satisfying prose poem thatย he says has already been around, at leastย since Stein and Williams, and just needsย the benefit of a littleย theoryย ( provided, as Silliman admits, by Barthes,ย Bemevoste & Voloลกinov). But Silliman seems to spend most of his creative energies in delineating a concept's ancestry rather than in justifying its radical newness. When Hugo Ball, for example, coined the phrase "new sentence" to refer to the super-charged ("transrational")ย vocables of language, the product had the immediacy of a sound poetry. To know it is to hear itย or at least see the distinctiveย visual reconfigurations on a page's neutral surface asย concrete poetry.ย But Sillimanย has the unenviable task of restrictingย the "poet's prose" to an examination of its visual (linguistic) properties only, giving a very differentย "feel" to poetry reading, andย it's not the first time it's been done either.ย I think his efforts to do so make himย Chomskyan (or Platonist) outright.ย But more of that later.Theorists as important (and refreshingly honest)ย as Sillimanย purposely give themselves away and leave it to us to connect the dots.


Let's ask instead of what is poetry rather what is the sentence, since the two seem interchangeable at interesting levels of discussion, and see if we can get from where Silliman says it is, i.e. in prose poetry of the right kind, to how it got there in the first place.Theย offering of the 'sentence', theย most oddly problematized 'syntagm' of all,ย is theย latestย accession toย the postmodern debate. Well, what do we make of that?ย When I see the discussion in The New Sentence skirt gingerlyย round some pretty sophisticated linguistic theory, I eagerly await the arrival of the classical 'straw man', and I get one: naturallyย someย ill-conceived view of the sentence (even that of Saussure, of all people)ย made either to conform toย (or change placesย with) Silliman's own.


The sentence that won'tย workย is just the ordinary one ofย propositions, carrier of common language (after Ayer, Quine);ย what's needed is a sentence loaded with the potential for self-critique (after Wittgenstein) or the most wildly implausible but workable rearrangement of its parts (after Stein).ย But where this comes from requires a rather clever trope of "ground and figure"-- wherever it's found inย contemporary discourse-- that amounts toย making any viewpointย "suspended above an abyss."ย Silliman's discourse is the same:ย with just a little archaeological workย we discover in language itselfย that essential impulse to shake offย messiness ( its potential for fragmentariness)ย and riseย to a new positionย over allย language. Why hasn't Silliman acknowledged here Derrida's admonition not to see language as anything but a harbinger of death, the "abyss"? The hope for the Language poet is that the ย postmodern poem can't just mean anything, after all.


Derridean binary-bashing doesn't seem to be to Silliman's liking (not if all he's got is theย mundane prose/poetry type)ย so he's opted forย what I think is an argumentum ad origines,ย claimingย "that the sentence [read the stuff of poetry]ย as distinct from the utterance of speech, is a unit of prose" (73), a type of prosody now wonderfullyย attuned to its ownย inner grammatical dynamisms.ย So it seems what the 'new sentence' is is a product of the places it's already been, first seenย embryonicallyย inย the proto-models of Baudelaire, Mallarmรฉ. Now thatย traditional poetry seems to have runย its course, as the New Critics have talked about it, it's best to examine what's beenย overlooked most of all in the search for the origins of poetry:ย namely,ย language itself (whether prosodic or poetic),ย with itsย rich thickย mantle layerย of sentences and theย heady atmospheres ofย expression once they've been charged with largerย stylistic intentions. That's what poetry is, L-A-N-G-U-A-G-E, staring right in front of you, and why it sings by means of the 'new sentence'.


To the question 'What is poetry' his reply 'The Sentence, stupid!'ย is veryย direct but alsoย very problematical, as it should be.ย In a poetic manifesto whose title's too tantalizingly close to The New Organonย not to beย seen for the paradigmย maker it isย & the discourse never far from polemic for its own pleasurable sake,ย Silliman's expositionย turns intoย rarefied fun: in fact, poetry isย envisaged asย a Pure Land "of the one great sentence" (Barthes, cited in article) in which the pent up forces of "once-exteriorized poetic forms" (87)ย get released & rise above themselves in obedience to higher lexicalย principles,ย and poet Ron Silliman as its contemporary avatar. In the article "Controlling Interests" he's even referred to the new sentence's "discontinuous-but-eternal presentness" (180-81). Nothing's been this deliciously mystified since Artaud & Barthes. What's at stake is the essential commensurability of both writing and reading, for

...here is an important insight, which is that the modes of integration which carry words into phrases and phrases into sentences are not fundamentally different from those by which an individual sentence integrates itself into a larger work. This not only gives us a good reason for demanding a theory of sentences, but also suggests that such a theory would lead us toward a new mode of analysis of literary products themselves.

The hooting and shrieking marketplace of proseย is seen asย a type of poetry, chthonic but rhythmically alive, impelled to the surface by its own latentย energies.ย If language is made to look downย deep into the nature ofย human commerceย from the perspective ofย god-spectators at a Sophoclean tragedyย rather than at surface level, it discovers new ways of saying the sameย old things.


Theย "upward falling" language in Silliman's essay is also very telling.Theย  sentence, "the hinge unit of any literary product" (78), and origin and telos ofย  language is whereย things "integrate up" (87) or "the syllogistic move above the sentence level to an exterior reference is possible"(84) or"The deemphasis on the materiality of the text in this manner is an example of prose shaping poetic form"(82), or "Exterior formal devices, such as rhyme and linebreak, diminish, and the structural units become the sentence and paragraph" (79), etc. What are all theseย but descriptors forย the sentence, orย "the one great sentence", or the Sentence of a radically new contextualized prose poem that's been around at least since Williams and Stein?


And at some significant levelย are theseย not also Chomskyan "kernels" or innate phrase structures (lying deep in all language) capable of generating an infinite array ofย possible sentences for the "poet's prose"? A field of pressurized sites resulting in"sly and carefully-honed incommensurabilities". (89)ย Eliminate a linebreak, for instance,ย or stop making words rhyme where we'd expect them to, i.e. stop writing poems,ย and watch a whole new network of interrelated and purposefully ambiguous senses arise.(89) Don't write poems, in short: write 'sentences' instead. Look at the particularly Chomskyan way in which Silliman unpacks the potential grammaticalities of Perelman's sentences (88-89) or the linguistic contortions of a Jack Spicer reading (inย a chapter entitled "Sentences"): he might as well have been talking about d-structure and s-structure.What we want in the prose poem is where we get it in practice, courtesy of the "new sentence". The ideal and real poemย in language: both essentially there for the viewing.

This continual torquing of sentences is a traditional quality of poetry, but in poetry it is most often accomplished by linebreaks, or by devices such as rhyme. Here poetic form has moved into the interiors of prose. (89)

So Saussure's wrong; the sentence is a bona fide part of langueย because "Grammar has become...prosody". (88) What looks likeย parole, the speech of common discourse, never remains in prose poetry justย below butย also above the level of the sentence (Again, note theย "ground and figure"ย trope).ย A prose poetryย that retainsย its delicious ambiguity canย at the same time move like a syllogism, antedating and moving beyond itself. Wonderful versatility (and wonderful realignment with the ordinary language philosophers).ย And like a Platonist Silliman doesn't discard the material world but rather incorporates it into a new Organon, seeing it as the catalyst for a whole new body of poetical work, and giving to the act of reading aย conceptual rigor peculiar just to itself. "Imagine what the major poems of literary history would look like if each sentence was identical to a line".(90) Silliman is not just poet but linguist, ontologist and perhaps even cultural archaeologist (after Foucault).

Below are Silliman's celebrated characterizations of the "new sentence" that he enjoins us to look for in poetry.

1) The paragraph organizes the sentences;
2) The paragraph is a unity of quantity, not logic or argument;
3) Sentence length is a unit of measure;
4) Sentence structure is altered for torque, or increased polysemy/ambiguity;
5) Syllogistic movement is: (a) limited; (b) controlled;
6) Primary syllogistic movement is between the preceding and following sentences;
7) Secondary syllogistic movement is toward the paragraph as a whole, or the total work;
8) The limiting of syllogistic movement keeps the reader's attention at or very close to the level of language, that is, most often at the sentence level or below.

Below are mine (just to the extent that each is a statement of where I think the 'new sentence' as literary theory ought to belong).

1)The 'new sentence' accedes respectfully to classicism in thought (as per the suggestive title of Silliman's article);
2) The 'new sentence' theorist accedes gracefully but unwillingly to ordinary language philosophy;
3) 'New sentence' theory combined with a Silliman reading gets us closer to where the ideal postmodern 'site' is;
4) The verse line (in a true prose poem) hasn't been so much dematerialized as deterritorialized (after Deleuze);
5) 'Syllogistic movement' is the grossest misappropriation of poetic movment imaginable;
6) Restoring the lost ideal of the torqued line to poetic discourse owes a great deal to Plato, Chomsky & Hugo Ball;
7) The verse line (in a poet's prose) is not a quantity but quality of the "one great sentence" or Sentence;
8) Nothing reveals more the classicist temper in 'new sentence' theory than a Silliman reading (see 'YouTube' above).

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